LO4: Client And Audience Feedback

My feedback says:

• that both of my pages are too red and need more colours
• less photos for my contents page, add writing 
• change red transparent text box
• add main body copy

solution:

• add other fonts in contents page. e.g Impact font
• colours like yellow and black
• black text box white out line.

My feedback says:

• Headline not that readable
• Contents page writing font is too basic and change font to a be readable
• also the colour should be clearer
• The layout should be straighter making sure the columns line up

solution 

• use guideline extras to straighten up columns
• Use impact font and white colour to make clearer 

From this one my client says:

• text is needed in contents page
• mast head needed
• images need to be same size
• masthead not readbale
• don't need border on DPS body copy
• Need main article

Solution

• add text to boxes
• change font colour
• edit photo size in InDesign

From these responses to my survey I can establish

• that my front cover is the more favoured page
• my contents looks slightly empty
• the genre is clearly represented